These days the Internet has changed our lives. It has been(מיותר) entered our lives and take(gr. - taken) a very important place in many domains, from friendships to work. Some people will say that the Internet has many advantages and it improves our lives, while others say that it is very dangerous.
On the one hand, the Internet has many benefits. It allows a better communication between humans(ww. - people), by connecting twenty four hours, seven days a week. The Internet is available all the time, it's easy to use and (it) saves time in business or replacing(ww. - transferring) information from different places in the world. In addition,the Internet offers a lot of spare time activaties, like social networks, games and the opportunity to get some knowledge about things we are interested in.
On the other hand, the information people can find on the Internet can be very confusing and unreal. Today, anyone can enter any information he wants to the Internet without anyone who(מיותר) checking(ww. - supervising) it. This causes false and misleading information to be posted and misleading the(מיותר) . Furthermore, in the Internet can be a tremendous experience(phr.) that can lead to physical violence that sometimes can be ended(gr.- end) in murder. The opportunity to get connected with people from all over the world can make people meet some dangerous people.
Finally, we can see that along the benefits of the Internet, there are olso many dangers. In my opinion, in order to benefit from technology, there is the need to be aware and use the Internet wisely and not get(ww.) in contact with people we do not know.
This is much better. Good work!
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Daphna
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