Formal Letter

12th Bialik street

Holon.

April 15th 2010.

See the World agency,

N.O. 9562

New-York, NY.

Dear Sir./Madam,

My name is Dana. I am 24 years old and I have just complited my degree in Psycology. I am interested in an organized tour to the United Stated with an English-speaking guide.

I would like to have an adventurous tour that will include places like "Diseny World" park , "Wet 'n Wild" and the "Busch Gardens". Moreover, I would like to take part in mountains clambing and ice-skating, if it's possible. Furthermore, I would be gratfull if the tour would include some caltural things, like museums.

I would like to know about the hotels we will stay in and the specific places we will trevel in. Moreover, it will be nice to know how we will move from one place to another.

I look forward to a prompt replay.

Truly yours,

Dana Alin.

Nice and simple. Well done!

(90)

Daphna

FORMAL LETTER

42 Bialik Street,

Holon,

April 4th, 2010.

The Manager

YourVoice station

12 Shazar Street,

Holon.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I'm writing you because I would like to suggest a format for a program for your station. The show will focus on teenagers and their problems, The teenagers will send faxes or phone the radio station and discribe their problem and the program will try to find them a solution.

The idea for the program came from all the problems that exist in their lives and the difficultiy to talk about them. The teens will call the program and express their feelings, The idea of the program came from their personality that dont let them express themselfs infront of familer faces.

Moreover, in the show teenagers will get the feeling that someone is really interested in their lives and really wanted to help them. Furthermore, through the radio other teens, that might have the same problem will be able to listen and learn from the advice.

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I look forward to a prompt reply.

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Yours truly,

Dana Lev.

(70)

Daphna