The last trip my classmates and I went on was to "Migal". The trip took place on January 11th and 12th, 2010. "Migal" is a research center that is located in Tel-Hai.I really had a good time there.


When we arrived at)the research center we entered a lecture about the human body in biology. (New sentence) after that we made our own brindash, that by the way was very tasty. Later on, we went to the "Tel Hai Hostel", At night we had another session, but this time about chimestry, we had a lot of experiments even those who glow in the dark.

In(ww. - On) the second day, we came back to "Migal" and we had another lectures(מיותר) such as(ww. - about) the effections(מיותר) of the pomegranate on our health and brain, then we has(ww + gr.) some(ww. - an) experiment about sugar. Before we go(gr.) back to Holon, we went(ww. - visited) to (the) winery of "Ramat Hagolan" , there(ww. - where) we saw all the long process that the wine need(gr.) to pass(ww.) untile he go out for sales(phr. - until it is ready to go out to the market) .

Finally, I had a great time there and also learn(gr.) a lot of interesting things, like that the pomergranate help(gr.) to engine(ww. - prevent) cancer.

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Daphna

Letter of Complaint

26 Senkar street,

Holon

March 1st, 2010

EasyGo travel agnecy,

12 Bialik street

Tel-Aviv.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I have been traveling with your agency for almost 10 years and I have always been satisfied, but the latest trip I went to(ww. - on) was taribble(sp.-terrible). It was exactly reversed from what was poblished(sp.-published) in your website. Inspite of recieving a 5 stars hotel as you said, we were given a lame hotel that has(ww+gr. -was) nearly(ww. - not even) 3 stars, and our guide's explainations weren't clear enough.

As I said, when we arived(sp.) at the hotel we discoverd, suprisingly, that the hotel we were given was dirty, the beds in the rooms were unsutiably (sp. - unsuitable) for sleeping. Moreover, when we wanted to get into our showers we discoverd that there was cold water and there was no light at(ww. - on) the first day we stay in(מיותר).

Furthermore, our tour guide was very moody and whenever we asked him any question about any site, he didn't answer and if we asked him to go to any(ww.) site that was mentioned in your website, he just ingnored us.

To conclude, I hope this unhappy experience would not be(מיותר) repited(sp.+gr. - repeat) itself. Also, your company will be needed(phr. - I expect your company...) to give me some compensation for the grift(sp.) I had.

I look forward to a prompt replay.

Truly yours,

Tom Shild.

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Daphna