12 Anilevitch Street

Holon

Decemner 3rd ,2009

Ms. Gilat Simon

Principal
Kugel High School

1 Mota Gor Street

Dear Madam,

Each year, in the 11th grade, schools give the opportunity to join a group of Israeli students and teachers going on a trip to Poland, and I, as a student in the 11th grade, think that the price is very expensive(ww. - too high).

First of all, this trip to Poland is very important for us, as Isreali teenagers.Poland is part of our history, and as a part of that it's our necessity(ww. - obligation) to see what happened there. but, with(מיותר) this expensive price (makes it impossible to) going(gr. - go) out on this journey make it nearly impossible to take part in(מיותר).

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Moreover, there are a lot of teenagers who want to take part in this experience and do not have a lot of(ww. - enough - or cannot afford to...) money to spend in order to get into this journey.

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In my opinion, and as a student in the 11th grade, the price should be cheaper. The school should find a financer from outer factor(phr.) like the municipality.

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Truly YOurs,

Rinat (add second name as well).

It's better, but it still needs some work.

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Daphna