Learning without Walls.

How its(gr.-does it) look like? Studying without books, notebooks, classrooms, chairs and tables.It's easy, virtual classes threw(sp.- through) the internet. In order to join this new program all you need is to get its address and go on line to its site on the net.

Undoubtedly, virtual schools have many advantages from many aspects. Financially, virtual schools save a lot of money. Learning in a virtual school can cost 4,300$ when the cost in traditional public school can get to 9,100$. Moreover, learning in a virtual school can give the student the opportunity to learn the material at his own pace.

Inspite of all those benefits, learning in virtual schools can be a difficulty for those who do not know how to use a computer. Another reason is that the material would not be so clear threw(sp.) the net and the student will understand wrongly the material(phr.- will not understand it) - why is that?.

Finally, I think that virtual schools are very unique and help students learn in a better way the subjects.This way of learning with the computer could make children actually like "school".

Beter. But, you still haven't answered my question at the end of paragraph 3.
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Daphna

12 Anilevitch Street

Holon

Decemner 3rd ,2009

Ms. Gilat Simon

Principal
Kugel High School

1 Mota Gor Street

Dear Madam,

Each year, in the 11th grade, schools give the opportunity to join a group of Israeli students and teachers going on a trip to Poland, and I, as a student in the 11th grade, think that the price is very expensive(ww. - too high).

First of all, this trip to Poland is very important for us, as Isreali teenagers.Poland is part of our history, and as a part of that it's our necessity(ww. - obligation) to see what happened there. but, with(מיותר) this expensive price (makes it impossible to) going(gr. - go) out on this journey make it nearly impossible to take part in(מיותר).

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Moreover, there are a lot of teenagers who want to take part in this experience and do not have a lot of(ww. - enough - or cannot afford to...) money to spend in order to get into this journey.

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In my opinion, and as a student in the 11th grade, the price should be cheaper. The school should find a financer from outer factor(phr.) like the municipality.

(Express your hope for a prompt reply before you end your letter)

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Truly YOurs,

Rinat (add second name as well).

It's better, but it still needs some work.

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Daphna