You go outside with your friends and they want to take drugs. In your opinion taking drugs is a wrong decision .You are afraid from the way your body will responed to the drug and even more that your parents will notice that you are using the drugs. What will you do? Take drugs and be "cool", or stay true to yourself?
This example shows us a situation in which you are under "peer pressure". Peer pressure is a situaton in which people in your age try to influence your decisions to the bad side.
I think that peer-pressure is not good and you shouldn't listen to your peers whenever they try to influence your decision. For example, your friends are planning to go out at night to some discotheque and your parents don't let you go. On the one hand, your parents don't let you go and you respect their decision inspite the fact that you do not agree with them. On the other hand, your friends try to influence your decision and in some way help you sneak out from your house and come with them to the discotheque. What should you do? So, you should listen to your parents becuase they are adults and they are responsible for you and your friends just need to understand you.
Finally, peer pressure is something that you can't change and everybody is effected by it. You should pay attention to what you do and get to know what the perfect solution to your problem is.
This is better, but still needs work. Please correct your essay again. (75)
Daphna.
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